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  • Listening to: Celldweller
  • Reading: Fanfics
  • Watching: Nothing
  • Playing: Clash of Clans
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Lemon water
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I'm still up and it's god damn almost 4 AM

TEN PERSONAL FACTS

  •  Name - Luis
  •  Will you answer all questions truthfully - Duh
  •  Are you single - Like a Pringle, like a Pringle
  •  Are you happy - Pretty much, yeah
  •  Are you bored - Hell to the mother fucking yeah
  •  Are you sad - Nah
  •  Are you Italian - Nopey nope
  •  Are you German - I ain't European
  •  Are you Asian - I wish
  •  Are you angry - Nah I'm mellow... Fucking Fly! I mean... Mellow...
  •  Are you Irish - Do I look white? Oh wait most if don't know what I look like...
  •  Are your parents still married - Nah

TEN FACTS

  •  Birth Place - Dallas, Texas
  •  Hair Color - Black
  •  Eye color - Dark brown
  •  Birthday - 1/17
  •  Mood - bored, hungry, tired and thirsty
  •  Gender - Male
  •  Lefty or Righty - Righty 
  •  Summer or winter - Winter
  •  Morning or afternoon - I'm nocturnal baby

TEN THINGS ABOUT YOUR LOVE LIFE

  •  Are you in love - Not really
  •  Do you believe in love at first sight - Meh
  •  Who ended your last relationship - Mutual break up
  •  Have you ever been hurt - Yup
  •  Have you ever broken someone's heart - God I hope not
  •  Are you friends with your ex - Ish
  •  Are you afraid of commitment - I don't think so
  •  Have you hugged someone within this week? - It's like an everyday thing
  •  Have you ever had a secret admirer - Not that I know of
  •  Have you ever broken your own heart? - It's a specialty

TEN CHOICES

  •  Love or lust - Love, lust is great but it's short lived
  •  Lemonade or iced tea - Iced mother fucking tea
  •  Cats or Dogs - Cats, I love dogs but I'm a lazy person do cats for sure
  •  A few best friends or many regular friends - Few best friends (then again I have both so...)
  •  Television or internet - Interwebs
  •  Pepsi or Coke - Coke
  •  Wild night out or romantic night in - I'd say both but romantic is close to my taste
  •  Day or night - I'm nocturnal baby~
  •  IM or Phone - Phone

TEN HAVE YOU EVER

  •  Been caught sneaking out - Couple times
  •  Fallen off the stairs - Once
  •  White water rafted - The hell is that? (One Google search later) Oh... No
  •  Finished an entire jawbreaker - Yeah, it's from them licking skills I acquired from eat out a yogurt cup without a spoon
  •  Wanted something/someone so badly it hurt? - Yeah...
  •  Prank called a store - I did that earlier XD
  •  Skipped school - I used to
  •  Wanted to disappear - Every god damn day

TEN PREFERENCES

  •  Smile or eyes - Eyes I just love'em~ (especially Hazel, Blue, Green and Light Brown)
  •  Light or dark hair - Both
  •  Fat or skinny - It don't matter
  •  Shorter or Taller ? - Either one works but it's hard for me to find a girl taller than me (I'm like 6'1)
  •  Intelligence or Attraction - If you don't get a science joke you ain't cute even you're made out of Copper and Terillium (This is a test btw)
  •  Cheerleader or Nerdy girl - Nerdy
  •  Hook-up or Relationship - Relationship
  •  Funny and poor OR rich and serious - Damn, I love humorous girls because I have fun, but I love to mess with serious girls. Probably funny and poor (thought I was a gold digger? Shame on you)

LAST THINGS

  •  Last Phone Call you dialed - Friend's mom
  •  Last phone call you received - Dad
  •  Last person you hung out with - Three of my irl buddies
  •  Last thing you ate - Fried chicken, stir fried rice, and pinto beans
  •  Last thing you drank - Lemon water
  •  Last site you went to - Wattpad
  •  Last place you were - Living room

RELATIONSHIPS

  •  Are you in a committed relationship - Nope
  •  When was your last relationship - Many, many moons ago
  •  Have you ever loved a guy/girl more than anything else in the world? - Yeah...
  •  Do you still love them - .....Yeah
  •  Do you like someone right now - Not really

FAMILY

  •  Do you and your family get along - Most of the time
  •  Would you say you have a "messed up life"- Not really
  •  Have you ever run away from home - I thought about it at one point
  •  Have you ever gotten kicked out - Nope
  •  If so, how long - If I did, probably it nightfall

FRIENDS

  •  Do you secretly hate one of your friends - Meh...
  •  Do you consider all of your friends good friends - All no, most yes
  •  Who are/is your best friend(s) - :iconangelxecho19: This motherfucker right here, :iconfairy-princesssstar: She's a sweetheart, and then her :iconxxtiffyrose101xx: ... I have no guy friends....
  •  Would you die for them - Hell fucking yeah!
  •  Who knows everything about you - They know a good amount of me
(Character P.O.V.)
I zig zag across the street dodging falling debris, I don't how I dodge them it's like something or someone from another view can see them for me and can control my movements, or maybe it's just reflexes, I dunno? I saw the destruction of those malfunctioning mechanical menaces, I wanted see buildings get blown up! Man life isn't fair sometimes.

"Where are your parents 'Viko?" Ally snapped me back to reality." Oh, my dad is a mechanic, he loves fixing cars, even some underground street racing cars, and my mom is a fitness coach, she's the reason I'm good condition."I mentally looked at Ally's face, she seemed puzzled. "I wonder how two people with two different passion, lifes and heritage came together?"Hey how did she know they're interracial couples? "I'm literally in your head, remember?" Oh yeah, that."Well I'm surprised you don't the saying, 'opposites attract'." I mentally saw an image of her face puzzled face, looks like she doesn't know the saying. "Where did that saying come from?" She asked, yup she didn't know the saying. "How should I know, that saying us older than me. Look it just means that two very different people who share a common interest end up being together." She seem to slightly understand, I really hate explaining stuff. "I think I understand." She simply replied. At least I tried. "Okay then, Ally since you seem to understand lets move on, what up with those monst- AH WHAT IS THAT!?" I yell in mid-sentence to dodge a metallic blur coming at me. When it missed it skids against the ground, it was a huge machine in the form of a dog. "L-LATRANS!!" Ally said with a shriek. The beast growl in annoyance that it missed me its prey. "I'm going on a hunch and say that's not your pet." I nervously spoke to Ally trying to remain as calm as possible. "DON'T JOKE! RUN!" She yell in a commanding yet frightened voice. "Don't need to tell me twice!" I yell and made a mad dash away from that hound. And to make things even better than mechanical menace is catching up to me. "How is it keeping up?!" I yell with more or less panic. "They were designed to assist the scouters so they're built to keep up with us!" She yelled the information. "Oh great, anything else I should know!?" I yelled out. "Those jaws will crush your bones like a twig, those claws will skin you and he will try to pounce you at any given oppotunity." She nervously responded. "I meant in a sarcastic way! Are you trying purposely mess with me!?" My panicked a bit more. "Sorry!" She flushes with embarrassment."It's fine, but how do I fight it without getting too close?" Immediately a light bulb went off in Ally's head. "I have weapons with me!" I swear I felt a vein bulge out of my temple, and my eye twitch. "That would been useful a while ago!" She plays with her hair in a nervous manner. "I forgot about it." She spoke very quietly."Look just activate the weapon or something." She nods, and I hear the sound like a sword being unsheathed, and I felt a weight on arms

I stopped and jumped up to a balcony to momentarily hide, which was a good 20 feet and was easy thanks to the suit and armor. I turned to look at my right arm a slender blade that glowed blue upon going up to the tip, and my left was a shorter but wider kinda like a double bladed axe except conjoined, and from the gem adorned on both gauntlets, many glowing blue digital circuit path run up and end in various areas on the armor piece.

"Whoa now this is what talking about!" I yelled in astonishment and then, suddenly a realization hits me. "That haywire hound has pretty good hearing don't they..?" I soldemnly asked her. She was silent and then nods. " Crap."

The robotic animal jumps up to the balcony behind me with a growl. With hesitating I just jump over the railing and hit the ground, strangely enough I didn't feel much of the impact, I turned to the beast as it jumped down as well. "I'm warning you, I have a weapon and I don't know how to use it!" I threaten the beast, but of course it decides to charge at me. "I try to be reasonable." I sighed before charging to the Canine, and I instinctivly swing the slender blade to the machine. But, the Latran jumps aside, it seem to growl in annoyance at my persistance in me living. Sorry me breathing is bothering you mutt.

"Come on, are you a dog or scaredy cat?" I called out the dog, but then again the thing probably doesn't feels any damage in its pride, but it was still fun to say. I also heard Ally giggle a bit. Then the mutt dashes to me while my guard was down. But, I caught him just in time to swing the blade slash his metal body in half, before promptly exploding in blackish smoke, and what was left was a pile of smoldering metal and short-circuiting wires. "Way past cool, I like the fireworks they put on!" I laugh in astonishment, Ally seems a bit taken back, but she still smiled which made assume it was nothing.

Then I saw the workplace of my mom, I smash the window which caused the people inside to panic, not my smartest or most subtle idea. "RUN!! IT'S THOSE MONSTER!!" a frighten woman yelled. Do I honestly look like one? "Whoa! Hey chill out everyone!" I tried to reassure them I'm not one of those things. "Seriously, isn't I'm not here to hurt anyone. I'm here to help everyone get out of here." I tried reasoning, but those monster did damage that's going to be hard for me to repair. Everyone scattered like cockroaches when the lights flick on. "No wait I'm trying to- ugh... Ididots." I groaned in annoyace, seriously, does anyone have a shred of reason? "Um, 'Viko let's go look for your mom, she's bounded to be here somewhere." Ally quietly spoke up, all I could do is sigh and and agree with nod.

I quickly dashed in possible hiding areas of the building, where ever people hid, ran or screamed in terror I simply move on. That really throw off some people. Soon enough I found my mother, she runs and trips. She prepare for the impact, but i caught her in time. She focused her sky blue eyes and into mine, at first Ithought she was looking at her reflection, but I realized she was looking my eyes which inherited from her, she found a familiar feeling from seeing a strange metallic 'monster'. I propped her up on her feet she was only few inches shorter than me, like Angelica, but obivously mature looking like a mother should look. " Are you okay Mo- I mean miss?" It's best that I don't tell my Mom what I'm involved in I wouldn't want her to worry about her only baby boy. I heard Ally attempting not to laugh, but she's bad at hiding."Oh, um, yes I'm fine." she quietly answered.

I better hurry to dad there's no telling if those thing made it there. "Listen, Ma'am, I'm needed somewhere, you and the rest need to evacuate to the east near Long Island and prepare to either fight or camp out until some kind of military help get you out of New York. Got that?" She simply nodded. I make my to the door and then."Wait, if you're saving people can you please recuse my husband and my son?" She ask pleaded and begged with worry. Not want to look like a jerk I answered. "Sure why not, I'll see what I can do miss." "Thank you, thank you thank you!" She smiled and hugged me tightly. "Okay hey easy there." I try to make her calm down before I turned around and started to walk off. "Wait, why are fighting your kind?" Ally looked sorrowful by her question. I guess it time for an answer. "There not my kind anymore, I'm not a monster, but don't call me a hero." Ally looks what suppose to be me and smilles in my respond. "I guess you're the lucky one then." My mom replied with warm laugh. "Lucky for me I don't believe in luck." I run out of the buliding.

"Viko..?" Ally shyly spoke. What's on your mind?" She looks surprised that I knew that something was bothering her. " Um, how come you don't consider yourself a hero?" Oh that's it? "I didn't do anything big. I just told some people to get out of an dangerous area." She looked kinda taken back by my small feat. "I see." She looked confused, oh great she's confused just what I need more questions. "I think we are just about there." Wait huh? I hit the breaks,I screech to a stop, and sure enough she was right it's my dad autobody and repair shop.I got there just in the neck of time those monster are causing havoc and they're closing in on the shop, I rush inside to see if I can find my dad. "Anyone here? I'm here to tell you to evacuate the area." Nothing heard me but the walls. "Maybe they left?" Ally suggested. "No, someone wouldn't leave since the no one told them to leave,that's why some people haven't left."

Dad just had to by around here somewhere. "I think he's around her-." A blunt object hit the back of my head cutting me off from my sentence and hit the ground. "OW WHAT THE HELL!?" I look up to relatively pale man, has hazel green eyes filled with intend to beat my head in, messy, dirty hair dark brown hair (probably from the grease and dust from the shop), black stained and worn navy blue suit. He swings a metal pipe again at me again, I narrowly dodged. "Whoa,whoa chill out out man!!" I panicked, I attempted to remain leveled headed and tried to reasoned with my father who going to bash my brain into a chucky salsa. "You're one of those damn beast here to wreck my shop!" Oh boy he's pissed... "What!? No I'm not, I'm to tell you get out of here because those other monster are close by ready to kill you! I'm trying to help you!" I yelled at my idiot dad. " How do I know you're not just trying to luring me to my death?" he asked firmly holding the pipe ready to swing. "He does have a vaild point." Ally told me. "Shut up, you're not helping." I scold her. "Sorry." She repiled with a nervous smile. "Look if I was one of those monsters mindlessly wondering around destroying whatever they wouldn't have I already tried to kill you?" He thought for a moment, he lowered the pipe he armed himself with. I sighed with a bit of relif to him mildly trusting me. "Fine, but if you decide to backstab me I will crack open those circuits." He pointed the pipe near my face. " Roger that Mr, Nice Guy." I rolled my eyes.

I guided him to an area where it sure be safe for him to part away to safety and find mom. "Thanks, uh." He look to me as if I was going to give away my identy. " Sorry pops, I got places to go and things to do and place to go. Hope you and the Misses Snelheid do good." I turn around and started to jog away. " Wait how you did know my last name or that I'm married?" He questioned. Oh crap I may have blown my cover. "Uh... Oh look at the time I better get going!" I hurried off as fast as I could before he could catch up.

"Phew, that was too close." I sigh with much relief to my see my situation past. I felt bad that I couldn't tell them that is fighting robot monsters that could maul and make mincemeat out me, I couldn't bare them be scared for their only child, but I made a promise I gotta keep. "Well looks like our recuse mission is complete, huh?" Ally spoke in my mind snapping me out of my thoughts. "Yeah we aced that mission! How would you rate that?" I asked her. "Hm, I guess it was pretty okay." "Okay?" "It could've gone better." She giggled. "Gee thanks." I sarcastically retorted. "Uh oh we have company up ahead." She warned me. "Heh,they made a bad choice." I chuckled as the blade extends and run straight to the danger.
(3rd P.O.V.)
Soon the pair started slaying the titanium terror, but three figures watch over them. "He's not stopping like the other two..." a male voice spoke with a partial full mouth. "Damn those traitors, their fighting back!" An aggressive feminine voice growled. "It's only three young human and three first generation vincens machina, they won't last long." An irritated, cold and menacing masculine voice spoke. " It's small group they'll dissolve soon the recent generation will put them to shame." He glared with a burning hatred. "Why do human fight a force larger than themselves? Its illogical!" The aggressive female spoke. " It won't matter in a few days this world will be wiped off this sea of stars and planet." He said cold heartedly. "But master they can slow down progress!" The female spoke up. She immediately covered her mouth. "M-master I-I-" She was cut off by her superior. "No you propose a valid argument. Vollerei your new mission is to kill those six troublemakers." He glanced to his subordinate. The male chokes and coughed up his meal. "What!? Why me!?" He exclaimed in confusion. "I'm now taking over your base of operation, Hasira you take over his base of operation in Cairo." He commanded. "Yes sir." The female leaped off the building. "Ugh... man." The male walked off in annoyance. "The power in this will be mine. Soon I can conquer everything and nothing can stop me in my wake!" He growled before walking off and disappearing.
Chapter 1: The Rescue Mission
Here's the first chapter following the prologue of my indie game, enjoy~
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  • Mood: Tired
  • Listening to: Celldweller
  • Reading: Fanfics
  • Watching: Nothing
  • Playing: Clash of Clans
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Lemon water
Stolen from :iconxx-kaii-xx:

I'm still up and it's god damn almost 4 AM

TEN PERSONAL FACTS

  •  Name - Luis
  •  Will you answer all questions truthfully - Duh
  •  Are you single - Like a Pringle, like a Pringle
  •  Are you happy - Pretty much, yeah
  •  Are you bored - Hell to the mother fucking yeah
  •  Are you sad - Nah
  •  Are you Italian - Nopey nope
  •  Are you German - I ain't European
  •  Are you Asian - I wish
  •  Are you angry - Nah I'm mellow... Fucking Fly! I mean... Mellow...
  •  Are you Irish - Do I look white? Oh wait most if don't know what I look like...
  •  Are your parents still married - Nah

TEN FACTS

  •  Birth Place - Dallas, Texas
  •  Hair Color - Black
  •  Eye color - Dark brown
  •  Birthday - 1/17
  •  Mood - bored, hungry, tired and thirsty
  •  Gender - Male
  •  Lefty or Righty - Righty 
  •  Summer or winter - Winter
  •  Morning or afternoon - I'm nocturnal baby

TEN THINGS ABOUT YOUR LOVE LIFE

  •  Are you in love - Not really
  •  Do you believe in love at first sight - Meh
  •  Who ended your last relationship - Mutual break up
  •  Have you ever been hurt - Yup
  •  Have you ever broken someone's heart - God I hope not
  •  Are you friends with your ex - Ish
  •  Are you afraid of commitment - I don't think so
  •  Have you hugged someone within this week? - It's like an everyday thing
  •  Have you ever had a secret admirer - Not that I know of
  •  Have you ever broken your own heart? - It's a specialty

TEN CHOICES

  •  Love or lust - Love, lust is great but it's short lived
  •  Lemonade or iced tea - Iced mother fucking tea
  •  Cats or Dogs - Cats, I love dogs but I'm a lazy person do cats for sure
  •  A few best friends or many regular friends - Few best friends (then again I have both so...)
  •  Television or internet - Interwebs
  •  Pepsi or Coke - Coke
  •  Wild night out or romantic night in - I'd say both but romantic is close to my taste
  •  Day or night - I'm nocturnal baby~
  •  IM or Phone - Phone

TEN HAVE YOU EVER

  •  Been caught sneaking out - Couple times
  •  Fallen off the stairs - Once
  •  White water rafted - The hell is that? (One Google search later) Oh... No
  •  Finished an entire jawbreaker - Yeah, it's from them licking skills I acquired from eat out a yogurt cup without a spoon
  •  Wanted something/someone so badly it hurt? - Yeah...
  •  Prank called a store - I did that earlier XD
  •  Skipped school - I used to
  •  Wanted to disappear - Every god damn day

TEN PREFERENCES

  •  Smile or eyes - Eyes I just love'em~ (especially Hazel, Blue, Green and Light Brown)
  •  Light or dark hair - Both
  •  Fat or skinny - It don't matter
  •  Shorter or Taller ? - Either one works but it's hard for me to find a girl taller than me (I'm like 6'1)
  •  Intelligence or Attraction - If you don't get a science joke you ain't cute even you're made out of Copper and Terillium (This is a test btw)
  •  Cheerleader or Nerdy girl - Nerdy
  •  Hook-up or Relationship - Relationship
  •  Funny and poor OR rich and serious - Damn, I love humorous girls because I have fun, but I love to mess with serious girls. Probably funny and poor (thought I was a gold digger? Shame on you)

LAST THINGS

  •  Last Phone Call you dialed - Friend's mom
  •  Last phone call you received - Dad
  •  Last person you hung out with - Three of my irl buddies
  •  Last thing you ate - Fried chicken, stir fried rice, and pinto beans
  •  Last thing you drank - Lemon water
  •  Last site you went to - Wattpad
  •  Last place you were - Living room

RELATIONSHIPS

  •  Are you in a committed relationship - Nope
  •  When was your last relationship - Many, many moons ago
  •  Have you ever loved a guy/girl more than anything else in the world? - Yeah...
  •  Do you still love them - .....Yeah
  •  Do you like someone right now - Not really

FAMILY

  •  Do you and your family get along - Most of the time
  •  Would you say you have a "messed up life"- Not really
  •  Have you ever run away from home - I thought about it at one point
  •  Have you ever gotten kicked out - Nope
  •  If so, how long - If I did, probably it nightfall

FRIENDS

  •  Do you secretly hate one of your friends - Meh...
  •  Do you consider all of your friends good friends - All no, most yes
  •  Who are/is your best friend(s) - :iconangelxecho19: This motherfucker right here, :iconfairy-princesssstar: She's a sweetheart, and then her :iconxxtiffyrose101xx: ... I have no guy friends....
  •  Would you die for them - Hell fucking yeah!
  •  Who knows everything about you - They know a good amount of me

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